envy started a new book, yes that's not new at all, but the book itself and what it is is new for her. Some day she got a steampunk craze and now has started this story, but would love some critique as she writes it and the idea. This is her, extremely quick, summary of it:

Okay, so it’s in real life first and its with Scott and Odele and this whole thing of Scott making this photo projector thingy that’s huge and when Odele first uses it she vanishes. Scott is sad but some odd person comes and tells him he must follow them or Odele may be lost forever. He follows and ends up in a whole ‘another world where royals exist, the ruler for now is the Ice Queen, a women people hate, and the peasants are mostly engineers and scholars, steampunk for this world, but the royals and upper-class act like the age of before the Victorian era and after the renaissance like in real life world. Scott is led by a guy, who talks of his lover that changed and vanished too, but he never says anymore, and Odele is like her in ways. They’re on the search and end up saving the kingdom. As Scott goes on to find Odele with this guy, he hears of a queen from before who was called the snow witch, queen of purity, virgin of virgins, the white queen, and the queen that the people loved. She ends up to be Odele in this world, and somehow she vanished before and the reason now why the ice queen rules, the one who tries to be just like the snow witch and loved but can’t. Rest is just still processing through mind. Oh, and the girl who the guy likes turned into the ice queen and Odele has turned into a sexy, seducing, temptress vampire like person. Oh and the guy who was married to the snow queen is the one who looks like Fai. The one who really loves Odele as well since they’re the same person in two different worlds.

She would love some words, anything, especially since she's never done steampunk before >.>
-let's see how this go...-

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oh, and thanks to Ecthelian for her picture Queen of Ice, it was what inspired her in the first place~